This morning I found this story on the counter that Emily had written. The other day she told me that she had written a story about Nicole and she was going to take it to school to read to her class. After school that day she said she read it and everyone liked it. I was busy and didn't read the story right then and then I forgot about it. So when I found it this morning, I thought it was so funny. I didn't realize how much she had written. Story writing has been hard for her this year (she gets that from me) so I was proud of her for taking the initiative to do this on her own and not even ask me to help her with it. I tried to keep the grammar and spelling exactly as she had written it, so I hope you can decipher 1st grade writing.
a story about Nicole. Nicole yells and screams. Nicole is very cute and loudy. If you want to now more then what im writing I mite invite you to my house. Sometimes I get to help get Nicole dressed and change her diaper. I sometimes haft to clean up after her it is not fun at all. She know’s how to say Papa. Nicole bugs me a lot. She is learning to give a kiss it is cute when she doe’s it. She also messes up a lot of things too. She is one big silly face too. She has the cutest clothes ever. She is a good girl. She doe’s what we ask her to do sometime’s she even puts my clothes away it is very cute to me. Do you think it’s cute? because I do. Let’s have a vote if they think it’s cute when Nicole puts my clothes away. Now lets get going. When we go out side sometime’s Nicole tryies to kike the ball but she allways fall down. I do not lagh because it is not funny. Please don’t lagh. Nicole is also cute at play with her toy’s. She drives her little toy car it makes noses for sure. I hope you liked learning about Nicole. by Emily Taylor
7 comments:
oh jessica, that is so sweet! i love how you can feel how much she loves nicole even though she's at the stage where she gets into everything. . . . and then at the end where she feels protective of her and instructs the listener not to laugh because it's not funny!
EMILY! i think you are a very TALENTED writer . . . AND an awesome big sister! thanks for letting your mom share your GREAT story with us!
Okay, that was soooo cute. I hope you keep that forever! And Emily writes so well. I think poor Riley got my bad spelling genes because she doesn't spell that well. Way to go Emily!
(P.S. I love the vote--and I vote that she is cute!)
What an awesome story. One day, Nicole will enjoy that story. Thanks for sharing it.
That story is so adorable... Emily has gotten SO big! I remember when her & Kaden were just 2 years old! It's so fun to get into the minds of our children, thanks for sharing!! :)
That was so cute. I especially liked it when she told us not to laugh. Sorry I couldn't help myself. You'll need to keep that for her.
What a great story! Emily is such a nurturing big sister.
How fun to know the thoughts of your kids. It is always so special when Jake shares something that he has put alot of thought into. Good job Emily.
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